| 2013-12-09 16:30:20 |
My Hot New Family Part 1
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Excellent story if you can read my comment through the bullock's cock fights!!! |
| 2014-01-07 14:12:21 |
The Diary, Daddy, and me chapter 2
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Your story is developing great. I am enjoying it. I have found some errors that either you have made by keystroke or by words sounding the same but are spelled different ask your assistant about these. |
| 2014-01-07 14:36:00 |
The Diary, Daddy, And Me Chapter 3
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I can't wait for chapter 4! |
| 2014-07-25 09:27:38 |
Lisa's Awakening Ch 1
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I enjoyed the build up of the series, and how in each chapter you added something new. I read all eight in one evening; leading into the early morning. I was hard with anticipation the entire time, and came four times all the most powerful I have had since I was 30. I am eager to read more chapters. |
| 2014-06-03 11:39:50 |
My disgusting experience with Daddy: Part 11 FINALE
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I enjoyed this series and am feeling a little lost by your conclusion. It needs a better ending than the one offered. Your story, your rules I realize my suggestion is you add just one more part to show what happened to her. |