| 2013-01-29 16:09:06 |
Asmodeus - Demon of Lust: Part Three
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She hasn't escaped yet and you'll have to keep reading to see if she ever does. I added that last bit to emphasize the power he has over her. The point is, whether it's intentional or not, Asmodeus is essentially controlling how she feels and she's just realized it... What would you do in a situation like that? Thanks for your comment :) |
| 2013-01-29 16:10:11 |
Asmodeus - Demon of Lust: Part Three
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She hasn't escaped yet and you'll have to keep reading to see if she ever does. I added that last bit to emphasize the power he has over her. The point is, whether it's intentional or not, Asmodeus is essentially controlling how she feels and she's just realized it... What would you do in a situation like that? Thanks for your comment :) |
| 2013-01-30 04:09:56 |
Asmodeus - Demon of Lust: Part Three
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Thank you! I'm so glad you get it! Like I mentioned before, just because she wants to escape doesn't mean she will. And who knows? Maybe she'll end up losing her fear completely, though personally I think that would be the real cop out because no matter how sweet or gentle he is, he's still a demon isn't he? The version I'm writing is how realistically I would behave in such a situation. I would never fully trust him or give up trying to be free but at the same time, I don't think I would have the strength to fight him. After all, every human has a little chaos in them, urging them to do the wrong thing... |
| 2013-01-31 07:26:17 |
Asmodeus - Demon of Lust: Part Two
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Thanks again everyone, part 3 is up, just have a look on my profile for it. I love the comments and it makes me so happy to know that you all enjoy my writing because I love doing it :) |
| 2013-03-08 06:02:31 |
Asmodeus - Demon of Lust: Part One
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@djb8247, thank you so much! You have no idea how much your comment means to me, my dream is to publish great novels and knowing that I have the support of people like you makes me so happy! Thank you |