| 2017-08-28 23:54:16 |
A Genius in King Arthur's Court Ch. 12
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I must admit, this is one of the best erotic stories I've ever come across, and I've read quite a few, so that's high praise. Granted, the erotica portions of it were secondary to the actual storytelling, but that's precisely what made it so pleasing a read. I'm curious as to what kind of plot you might have for a continuation of this story in the present day. I would guess the existence of other sorcerers would need be there to provide a struggle for our protagonists, but I suppose I'll find out when you write it. I'll definitely be checking out your other stories in the meantime. Kudos. |
| 2017-09-13 15:02:02 |
Secret Lives of King Togo Island (Part 1)
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The premise is pretty spectacular, but editing out typos and such would do the story a world of good. Looking forward to the rest of the series! |
| 2017-09-14 09:30:45 |
Secret Lives of King Togo Island (Part 1)
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The premise is pretty spectacular, but editing out typos and such would do the story a world of good. Looking forward to the rest of the series! |
| 2017-09-14 17:21:20 |
Secret Lives of King Togo Island (Part 2)
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Really needs editing, but still a promising story. |
| 2017-09-15 09:47:49 |
A guy and his...? 60 Dreamscape_(0)
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I must say, I am rather impressed. There are a few grammatical errors here and there (as a writer, I know full well that happens), but the storyline is fantastic! Took me about 8 hours to read all the way through to this chapter, but it was well worth it...and I'll be on the look out for the last few chapters. Haven't read many erotica stories that have kept me on the edge of my seat the way this one has. I ran out of positive ratings to give, but they are all deserving. Bravo! |