| 2012-12-08 03:19:20 | THE FIRST TIME_(11) | You guys are all just being over judgemental. Yes your right it's not a poem but I still found myself getting caught up in it just the same.  Good Job. | 
			
			| 2012-12-08 03:27:32 | Alissa and I Part two | This is too hard too read.  Write better next time. | 
			
			| 2012-12-08 14:36:37 | My girl and I's Rollplay | I going to have to agree with everyone, as well as add something myself -- WTF!? | 
			
			| 2012-12-08 16:09:33 | The Great Out doors Day 1 and Morning of 2 | Exactly!  What's with this crap. | 
			
			| 2012-12-11 20:55:21 | Stepsister Seduction: Chapter 3: Seducing a new Victim | Excellent writing sir |