| 2016-08-18 16:14:53 |
The Perfect Couple Pt. 1
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this story needs a lot of work...this is not a story that could happen "as told"...please try again...but the ages are right for a really good story the relationship are wrong... |
| 2017-01-01 17:42:52 |
Popping Babies Cherry
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no stories after 2012....what ever happened... |
| 2016-08-14 21:05:39 |
How a Dog Forced me into Submission_(1)
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part 2 would be nice... |
| 2016-12-28 18:57:21 |
The Caller_(0)
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well you sure didn't write this....i have seen it around and their are more chapters than this...if you look at your tags you will see that...i like the story very much...even though i prefer bestiality... |
| 2016-06-28 16:56:16 |
Love (And Sex!) In The Time of Zombies
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i agree it was written well...i am not into zombies so the scifi part flew over my head...i might add that i did not finish it either...i agree you need to break this up into a couple of chapters to get me all the way through...finally what the hell happened to his friends...i know presumed dead...but what happened to them should have been part of the story... |