| 2014-07-31 11:41:59 |
Elliot
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Dear Anonymous Reader 2014-07-27 15:29:38 - If you never had sore nuts or 'blue balls' then you don't have any. |
| 2016-03-20 12:29:24 |
My Sister's Habit
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You need practice with editing and proofing. |
| 2018-02-17 09:19:31 |
How It All Started: My Older Brother_(2)
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The premise of the story is good, young girl caught masturbating, big brother can't stay away and she is unsure of how to act. You do need to proof read a few times before finishing. This work reads like a first draft. And she should have been rattled, not raddled. You have promise as a writer. |
| 2019-10-07 07:57:37 |
Maxi discovers Viagra
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This story was first written a couple of years ago, by me, and posted. I went back over it a couple of months ago, made some corrections, changed a line or two then edited the story online. When someone edits a posted story, no matter how long it's been on, XNXX puts it up as a new story, regardless of how many comments or votes it has. I've done this several times for quality of story, not quality of votes. |
| 2020-02-07 10:46:26 |
Snowed In With Dad
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A good story. Hopefully this is just the foreplay. |