| 2013-04-19 17:35:43 |
Andrew Lake Part 1 - My Kinky Chemistry Teacher
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Not Bad not bad at all well done mate i really enjoyed that.. |
| 2013-04-23 08:06:47 |
The Girl Next Door Chapter 1 A Dream of A Night
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I am from South Africa so my English is second language but i try my best. |
| 2013-04-26 03:20:57 |
The Girl Next Door Chapter 1 A Dream of A Night
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I know thw length is a bit short and no there is no limit to how much you can post but there is a character minimum that you need to pass. I an working on the romance part my stories. I am not usually that romantic but these last few weeks I have started to enjoy the romance in these stories so I will try my best with the next story. Thank you for the feedback |
| 2013-05-06 16:28:51 |
Boy Scouts Part 6
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These stories weren't bad... I understand that Eliza was confused it happens to us all when it comes to love... They were a bit short but I cant complain my stories were also short. Go read mine if you like and keep up the good work. Alexis |
| 2013-05-14 15:40:11 |
Brother and Sister Get Wasted
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Great Idea though... a bit rush I must say.... explain a bit more of how it feels and what happens... try to let the reader be i the position of the characters |