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Comments from Quizich
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-06-04 12:51:26 | An Unexpected Turn... | Nice writing, I'm interested to read what's happened further on ... As 'luv2swallow' said, give your story some room to unfold - tell us all the juicy details, it makes your story much more memorable ... also, spacing between paragraphs ... other than that just relax and have fun writing - I expect I'll also have a lot of fun reading. |
| 2015-06-12 09:11:08 | Beach Photography Part 2 | Well done ... my member in full must is praise enough, I'd say :))) Keep it up, I got the feeling you've been enjoying writing this ... few times ... ;) |