| 2008-07-28 01:55:36 |
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A few spelling typos, but not enough to ruin a really good story. Can't wait to read chapter 2. |
| 2008-10-14 12:31:55 |
Family Reunion for Mom's Birthday
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Enjoyed your story.... if should be continued...... |
| 2008-12-04 23:27:15 |
My Unforgetable First Time
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A very well written story indeed. A goof build up and well executed storyline. Had me hard and stroking by the end of the story and wishing I was also involved in this tryst of young love. |
| 2008-12-08 13:29:32 |
Yes, Mr. Shaver (Part 1)
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Very good start indeed Lillth. I am now rushing over to read the 2nd part to see how it ends. Hopefully with more then just my hard cock. |
| 2008-12-08 13:50:12 |
Yes, Mr. Shaver (part 2)
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Where is the rest of it. Not fair to get started and then stop in the middle of Travis entering you and Pete pushing into your mouth again. |