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2013-08-29 09:31:49 | My hot Niece | Quote 2013-08-29 07:47:33 Poorly written, but a good plot! Thank you I am going to be looking into trying to find a Free program I have that can help me write stories better I know what I ant to say its placing it all together that I have trouble with. |
2013-08-29 09:32:52 | My hot Niece | 2013-08-29 01:44:04 Punctuation would be good. Perhaps capitalizing proper nouns? Fully formed sentences would be a huge bonus. Anonymous reader Thank you I will work on this I Appreciate all your imput |
2014-08-29 13:32:46 | Chris and Christie | This is an awesome story I love it I wish I could write as good as you. |
2013-09-07 15:00:16 | My Hot Niece Chapter One Re-vamped | Yes I agree My trouble is I have the story know what I want to say then when it comes time to put it down I get stuck and that Sucks! Hey no ones perfect Except God Hell at least I am trying I even Purchased the things to help me Bear with Me Please everyone Ill do my best to get it right> |
2013-10-06 09:18:56 | My Hot Niece Chapter Three Re-Write | WELL if you guys know how I can delete all my stories please let me know I have tried to contact the website owner but no replies back I guess no one owns this Sorry You Guys do not like my stories have a nice life you will see me no more and Please |