| 2015-07-09 01:24:17 |
Messy Roommate 5
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Listen I know you guys apparently get off on Revenge, but what part of this story makes you think Jim wants that? He's the one who's excited about seeing her cheat, it isn't some soul crushing betrayal for him. Now he may not be very excited about Paul doing what he's doing, but just wait and see how it plays out. |
| 2015-07-09 17:55:30 |
Generic Bully Story
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Great suggestion guys! With the way I'm crafting this story I could add anything from revenge, to aliens, look forward to some more funny crazy stuff happening. |
| 2015-07-09 18:58:41 |
Messy Roommate 5
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Double not triple you say? Please, Master of Paragraphs, show me how it's done, I'm always interested in learning. |
| 2015-07-10 00:30:38 |
Messy Roommate 5
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Ahhh I see exactly what you mean, to be fair I know that's what you're suppose to do. But I've gotten into the habit of not doing that for JUST this site. For some reason if I write my stories in a RTF, and only use single spaces between paragraphs it crams everything into one giant paragraph when I post it to the site. So I've started spacing them a little more to make sure that doesn't happen. Seriously tho, why do I keep getting shit on how I write my stories, yet of all the other complete trash stories out there, not a single voice is raised? |
| 2015-07-17 18:49:05 |
Generic Bully Story 3
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You guys just went full retard. Never go full retard. Honestly tho, gosh that's.. That's something.. I'll see what I can do? |