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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-01-19 21:54:20 | What Daddy Needs | "What Daddy Needs" - Sixteen Year Old Virgin Daughter, Phoebe and Thirties-something Year Old Was Veteran Father, Jake. Some observations that would enhance the essence of the stories chronology and substance! As an avid lover of incest genre tales, my most favorite blood-kin incest is father/daughter escapades of good quality!! The author can give more detail and descriptions of the characters, i.e., names, ages of each character, and details of the much needed foreplay--gentle, loving and sensual, but not abusive--and follow through to the completion and after-glow of the consummated sexual play! The story theme and context is quick and jerky, as to his drunken-rage anger and quickly to a more caring, thoughtful father. Where's Jake's wife? Who cared for his children during his tours from the family home? The word "gran" was mentioned but there was no explanation nor reason! The story has merit as Jake has softened; Phoebe might accept him as "the one" in her life! |
| 2015-01-19 22:01:49 | What Daddy Needs 2 | Thanks, but no thanks!! Not my "bag of tea" and my empathic brain doesn't compute! |
| 2015-01-19 22:50:26 | A true father daughter love | The "Pregnancy" in the story description/introduction is for the fact that his deceased, pregnant wife (and unborn child)--not for the fucking nor impregnating of his fourteen year old daughter!!! He also did not complete the copulation--consummation--of his daughter, as he pulled out!! No Guts, No Glory! |
| 2015-01-20 00:08:43 | Fucking my not so little brother! | Brother, 'gunzidiot', you are so right!! You have a major job, and at least eight years of English studing, and be even close to par (meaning equal, close, etc) of appropriate English termnology, spelling, punctuation and senencing. I'm sorry to be so harsh, but I'm of the opinion the truth is always best. Keep writing, though! Practice, practice and practice--will eventually make better; if you're lucky maybe much better! I love the theme and context of your incestual story. A seventeen year old (very willing) sister and her thirteen year old novice but willing brother. And of course he's got a big cock (though I do doubt nine inches). |
| 2015-01-20 21:00:34 | Farm Girl - part 1_(0) | Farm Girl - Part 1" - Unknown Aged Unnamed Farm Girl, Her Four German Shepherd Dogs, Tom, Jack, Rex and King, Her School Classmate Tony Spinozzo and His Unnamed Pa Spinozzo. |