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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-03-09 06:33:19 | I have a Dick and a Pussy II | "I Have A Dick And A Pussy-Part II" - Fifteen Year Old Hermaphrodite (Male Dominant) Brother, Unnamed And Thirteen Year Old Virgin Semi-Hermaphrodite Sister, Megan; and Twenty-four Year Old Hermaphrodite (Female Dominant) Friend, Shannon; and Thirteen Year Old Bi-Sexual Normal Genetalia Female Friend (Of Megan), Casey. The addition of Megan's friend Casey to the group-mix served only to muckup and increase the confusion of the dick's and pussies of the three main characters (Unnamed brother, his sister, Megan and their friend, Shannon)! The organization and who's dick is in who's pussy--the individuals with three cocks and three pussies--is difficult to write comprehensively (understandable); and even more difficult to understand by the reader. One more bi-sexual pussied female (Casey) expodentially added to the confusion!! Less is more clarity and also less confusion...and not necessary to enhance the tone and context of the story subject!! |
| 2015-03-09 07:20:05 | She had a Dick and a Pussy I | "She Had (Has ?) A Dick And A Pussy-Part I" - Twenties Years Old Single Male Ron and His Twenties Years Old Female Fuck-Buddy Single Neighbor, Jenny; and Their Twenties-something Hermaphrodie Single (Female Dominant) Janice. This story is very much better written, in every aspect (language, content, context, theme, spelling, phrasing, paragraphing, sentence structures, etc.) than Parts I and II of "I Have A Dick And A Pussy"!! Hopefully Part II of this story will not include any additional characters!!! More detail needs to be employeed in the details of the character's descriptions, etc., including more details of the various settings and locales of scenes! Many times the scenes are short-circuited and finish abruptly (suddenly)!! This chapter is thorough with the clarity of normal-sexed Ron and Jenny in relation to hermaphrodite Janice; they are all at ease with each other. Their interactions are easily imaged and visualized. Their roles are great and dialogue is good! |
| 2015-03-09 07:41:28 | She had a Dick and a Pussy II | "She Had (Has ?) A Dick And A Pussy-Part II" - Twenties-something Single Boyfriend, Ron and His Twenties-something Neighbor Single Fuck-Buddy Friend, Jenny; and Their Twenties-something Single Hermaphrodite (Female Dominant) Friend, Janice. This story, both Parts I and II, are considerably better in every aspect than both Parts of "I Have A Dick and A Pussy"!! And this story does not have the unnecessary and unwelcome entry of a fourth person! The much improved grammar, in most every area, made reading this story a pleasure, including the theme and context being much more clear and detailed. The one major negative is this Part II is too fucking short. Also, the descriptions of the sexual activity is hurried and too brief; the writer needs to slow the sex activities while adding more and longer details! A fantastic addition would be the pregnancy of Jenny BY their hermaphrodite friend, Janice!! Keep up this kind of good writing! |
| 2015-03-09 08:14:19 | Seducing Our Sons | "Seducing Our Sons" - Mature Thirties-something Single Mother, Edie and Middle Teenaged Virile Son, Peter; and Their Neighbors, Mature Thirties-something Single Mother of Two, Lena and Middle Teenaged Virile Son, Danny and Younger Teen Daughter, May. This writer has the need to add unnecessary characters to the stories supposedly, in my opinion, to sex up the stories plot and theme to stroke level with rampant perverted activity. Of course, with the speed of the story the addition of the extracurricular action is needed in order to add substance to the stories theme and context. This story consists of nothing more than two young teen boys fucking two mature sex starved women--they just happen to know each other and are neighbors. No blood-kin incestual activity except very brief nudity and very brief foreplay of tit massages and pussy rubbing. |
| 2015-03-09 08:43:36 | Mom's New Girlfriend ('she' had a dick) | "Mom's New Girlfriend (She Had A "Dick")" - Early Forties Sex Starved Single Mother Of Two, Mandy And Twenty-two Year Old Signle Sex Starved Daughter, Carla And Mid-Teenage Horny Son, Erick; And Mandy's "Faux Female" Transgendered (A Queer With A Dick And Chemically-enduced Tits), "Cindy". The three family member/characters of mother Mandy, daughter Carla and teenaged son, Erick have been reduced to believing "Cindy" is a freak of nature, when in actuality "shim" is a transgendered man with a cock and balls feeding on chemically alternating drugs to become effiminate and grow boobs. What the fuck, though. It's all worthy of titillation and maybe an orgasm for some of the male (and even female) readers! |