| 2013-12-27 15:46:18 |
Watching my gf from the closet
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way too short, it just got started and then ended |
| 2013-12-27 15:49:19 |
Debbie's Panties
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it felt a little rushed. Take your time to develop the story and the sex. |
| 2013-12-27 16:06:11 |
How Daddy's Devil-Boy Became Daddy's Little Girl
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Good daddy story. Hot. |
| 2014-02-09 23:10:22 |
The Transformation of Jesse
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imaginative, well done. Jessica sounds hot. One little quibble. She wears stockings, not stalkings. |
| 2015-01-17 03:53:58 |
How to Unveil Yourself to Your Love
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A nice set of instructions. Too bad you can't do an illustrated version of this showing all the combinations you set out. |