| 2015-08-12 23:15:59 |
In the family (part 1)
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Good story beginning. Please work on your grammar. I know that we are reading porn, and if we have to filter out mistakes, it looses the connection between the author and the reader. |
| 2014-05-11 08:05:02 |
Beautiful Niece Kaylee Ch.8
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Good continuing story. Please don't mess it up with her getting pregnant. |
| 2014-05-13 02:24:15 |
Peeing In The Woods ..... Part 1
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A fun, well written story. Please continue. |
| 2014-05-17 01:53:37 |
Kathrine from Ecolle St Justine
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An interesting view of what is long past.My knowledge of the period of the story is scant. I'd like to read more. |
| 2014-10-12 06:46:36 |
Caine and Amy
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Pregnancy would ruin the story. Don't take the story in that direction. |