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Comments from Norton X
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-07-25 07:36:44 | I CAN'T RESIST MY NEIGHBOR, OR HER TEENAGE GIRLS! - PART 4 | Thanks for continuing the series in spite of everything. |
| 2016-05-20 20:00:17 | A Saturday of Cheerleader Pleasure Ch. 06 | Good work. I don't necessarily have to like EVERYTHING in a story in order to vote positive for it. This story had enough in it for me to like. The ending was great. The protagonist got to live out his fantasy. Well-written teen sex story. Thank you, Mrsterygor. |
| 2016-05-20 11:05:15 | Teachers Pet: Part two | I really liked how you included a reference to xnxx in your story. It's quite the naughty tale, showcasing the dangers and pleasures of the Information Era and the people living in it. This may be fiction but a lot of what is written here happens in real life, especially the Googling and wanking to photos of real people you know rather than just porn stars. A very knowing study in modern lust. The sex was extremely hot! Love the ending! Thank you for your time and effort in writing this sexy continuation of your Teacher's Pet story. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I hope you will continue this with a third installment, Becky. |
| 2016-05-21 19:37:33 | The Debt_(1) | I thought this was really good, well-written and all. The only reservation I have is the paragraphs. There should be a blank line between each paragraph here, but you've merely started a new line below your paragraphs and they look messy and confused. Press the Enter/Return key twice when you're done typing a paragraph to create a blank line before typing the next paragraph. You do have blank lines here but there are more paragraphs in your text that need to be separated from the text block. I gave your story a positive vote so this is constructive criticism. Thanks for writing, Wayne. Hot story. |
| 2016-05-21 19:33:13 | Back in the days of Athens_(0) | Excellent story and a unique entry in the slavery category. I enjoyed it immensely. Bravo, Winter Wolf. |