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Comments from TheHumanoid
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-09-15 08:03:35 | One in a Million Ch.3 | Liking the story so far. Only thing I can say is I think he left the Hospital too quick. I cant see Doctors letting a patient leave the same day that they wake up from a coma and recovering from a lighting strike. Think he should have stayed a few more days or have used his new powers to be able to leave quicker with out questions from the Doctors. |
| 2017-10-05 17:55:34 | A Genius in King Arthur's Court Ch. 12 | Needs a followup story. How they got Madeleine an id and history so she can blend in to the modern world. Wood love to see his sisters reaction to how Madeleine came in to Davids life. And maybe a run it with modern wizards and magic. Or another visit to the Lady of the Lake. |