| 2014-09-19 11:51:14 |
The Night of Their Lives
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This is a fantastic story! Whether you continue on with this arc, these characters, or just move on to another story altogether, I will most certainly be reading it. :) |
| 2014-09-06 10:21:33 |
Annabelle's Day - Part 2 - Party
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Absolutely love your story. The only mistake I see is using your instead of you're, and really that is just a small slip up that really isn't that big of a deal. I have always been a huge fan of the more romantic stories, it makes the sex and lust so much more real to me. Please continue your fantastic series, I hope to see even more from you soon. :) |
| 2014-10-21 09:48:56 |
Malpractice Chapter 2: Practice with My Sister
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Hi Dadachum, this is actually anon poster #2, decided to sign in this time so it would be easier to identify me, to be honest I didn't think you would respond lol. But if you would like, I would love to proofread for you whenever you are ready to publish your next chapter. I personally love adding detail, in fact often times I do it too much, so if you find yourself having problems with it, I would be absolutely honored to be of any help. So if you want, shoot me a PM on the forum and we can work something out :) Like I said before, can't wait to see where this goes in the future! |
| 2014-12-22 08:16:02 |
"Nothing but Love"
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@anon Um.... thanks? :) |
| 2015-11-20 08:37:38 |
The Forest Nymph: Part 1 - A Second Chance At Life_(1)
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I wanted to log in just so I could comment here, not as an anonymous reader but as a person you can know. This story is absolutely phenomenal. The plot is beautiful, the detail stunning, your writing style flows effortlessly, and the themes you employ are timeless and touching, painting the entirety of the scenes in dazzling light. Please continue to write, you have a wonderful gift that I hope to experience more than just this once. Thank you so much for sharing with us, I cannot truly express how incredible this is. |