| 2016-05-22 10:18:55 |
Back in the days of Athens_(0)
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Fantastic story. As others have said, an excellent story in spite of it being in your weaker language you did very well. I look forward to seeing more and if you need an editor I would help you. |
| 2016-05-22 10:24:44 |
My Brother's Genie - Chapter 06
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Good stories. Please continue |
| 2016-05-25 12:41:25 |
Meeting Amy_(1)
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Good story bro. Little fast paced but keep going. |
| 2016-05-25 11:25:48 |
Leben 2
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Love your stories man. I'm glad every time you post. |
| 2014-05-17 15:31:57 |
Sister Helped Me
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Good start to a good story |