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Comments from Pervertboy1
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-07-06 09:46:21 | Club Fatale | I love this story except for the canabiliism. This story could also use more premature ejaculation cause the girl is too hot or the sex is soo good |
| 2017-04-13 08:23:19 | The Ring of Desire - Chapter 2 | again great story. I love the low stamina very much just like last time but I don't quite like the unrealistic pleasure that the girls experience. for me one of the best parts of the story was that the boy got all the pleasure that he would never have been able to get on his own. i admit I'm being quite picky but your a really good writer(best I've read) and id like you to keep the quality up. the only bad thing was that the girls seemed to be getting real pleasure when it should all be about the boys quest for his own greed and pleasure. I'm a big fan of the boys innocence and over excitement. keep up the good work :) |
| 2017-04-13 07:58:43 | The Ring of Desire - Chapter 1 | I don't usually comment but I just had to. This is by far the best story I have ever read and I have read a lot. I am a big fan of everything about this story especially the main character who is so relatable to me. please feel free to message me id love to discuss things we are very alike. I'm no where near as good a writer as you but you share many of my ideas that I struggle to express. please don't change the amount of sexual stamina that the boy has as it would ruin the relatability to readers of his age. please also keep the selfishness and appreciation/excitement from small things like hand jobs even as he experiences more and more thanks a lot for this story and I beg you please write more |
| 2018-04-28 04:19:04 | Young learning. | I really liked your story near the start up until the 11th paragraph. I personally like when authors describe realistic sex scenes that incorporate boyish desperation, selfishness when it comes to sexual pleasure (only thinking of their own orgasm) and premature ejaculations (orgasming embarrassingly fast and leaving the girl without orgasm) this is something few authors do but in those first 11 paragraphs you did it quite well. I would love to communicate with you further to discuss and share ideas. message me if your interested. |