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Comments from Joe Long
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-11-04 01:50:26 | Let's Talk | and I will always bow down to Mr. Scribe, his writing skills make me blush. |
| 2014-09-16 20:07:29 | Morning Bells (Part Seven: Big Bang) | @delta we can take convo over there if you want, but it's a true story, it happened man, I was not thinking with my brain and then in an instant sheer panic - wtf was I doing? |
| 2014-09-27 00:29:02 | Morning Bells (Part Eight) | @delta you sound similar to me but obviously I didn't get nearly as much action as pnut. it's really bringing back a lot of feelings to write down my story |
| 2014-10-10 04:03:09 | The Love of a Cousin part 2 | really great writing and story. great at conveying the emotion. I was crying and nervous at all the right moments. now I turn grammar nazi - it's "she and I" not "her and I". Maybe OK in quotes, as many people say it, but it really bugs me. A handful of grammatical and spelling errors. and you have to hit the carriage return twice between paragraphs to get an actual blank line when it's pasted in here to be published - that really helps the readability. |
| 2014-10-20 08:47:44 | Until we meet again :) | ah, then click "other stories by this author" |