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Comments from randyoldman
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-09-21 19:58:40 | Joe's Story | I don't mind the feed back about my writing style and the lack of punctuation, it will make me try harder when I write a sequel. I do take umbrage at being called a loser. You don't know me so how can you say that. Why don't you tell people about stories you have written, so then maybe we will be able to read a story that has been written perfectly. |
| 2015-08-28 21:38:33 | The Bitches | in answer to the 2015-08-28 20:32:15 comments, you just proved the adage. A Critic; One who reads quickly, arrogantly but never wisely |
| 2014-09-24 02:32:14 | Joe's Story | Thank you for your apology, which is accepted without reservation. Any words of advice would be greatly appreciated |
| 2015-09-22 14:45:22 | Girlfriend and Daughter | The anonymous readers who criticise, and I am sure it is not just my work. Should identify themselves so that I, and I am sure others would love to read your works, if just to see how you write a story perfectly. If you are not willing to do that, shut the fuck up. |
| 2015-09-27 21:13:08 | The Stranger_(2) | This site is called "sex Stories" So if pyroclast wants full background of characters and no sex, I suggest he/she writes a story giving all that information, or reads the likes of Barbara Cartland. Until you pyroclast publish a story I suggest you keep your pathetic comments to yourself |