| 2017-05-13 01:54:51 |
THE MASTER AND THE SLAVE
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This was a good story and a lesson about history too James. I think it's amazing how some people today still judge one another by skin color or what our ancestors did hundreds of years ago. |
| 2017-05-13 05:10:30 |
Right or Wrong
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This seemed to be a kinky version of The Match Game and Who Wants To Be A Millionaire mixed together. I did enjoy it though. |
| 2017-05-18 01:19:43 |
Rite of Passage Ch.04
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Well, this was another nice and kinky chapter. I'm not sure if you have the total series complete yet but it would be fun to have a bi girl or two join in for some play. |
| 2017-05-20 06:29:36 |
Potential Part 18
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I've certainly enjoyed the series thus far. With all of the character development between plots and sub-plots, I find it amazing you can still stay focused on who is doing what with whom. I look forward to the next chapter. |
| 2017-05-22 20:59:05 |
Mommy&Me Series: Justina
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I'm not trying to be overly critical, but I do have a few suggestions. A few paragraphs would have made it easier to read and there wasn't really much foreplay. Perhaps Justine could have a bit of pubic hair. The reason for that is when you are tribbing or scissoring clit to clit the hair makes your orgasm more intense. I did like the story and look forward to the next chapter. |