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Comments from wantsomefun
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2010-03-31 04:53:56 | The Rabbit Died - Chapter 3 | I had almost given up on seeing the conclusion to this story. After two amazing chapters, I wondered if you guys had quit. I'm glad you didn't . Somehow, I can't tell what's going on here. Are the paragraphs told from Jeanne's point of view written by the female part of PL69 while the portions told by John are the work of the male half of this writing team? The writing is so seamless, and the style and vocabulary are so similar that I can't tell! I myself have entertained the idea of a collaborative story or a team effort like I've seen ob the forum, but I can't imagine how that could be done this well. So the question is this: Are the two of your REALLY that compatible that you can blend your thoughts and words this well? Did you two brainstorm the idea for the story, and then let only one of you actually write it? Or is the writing couple PL69 actually only one person? Do tell! In any case, don't make us wait four months for more. |
| 2010-04-12 00:42:58 | Izzy & Me | Maybe it's just me, but it seems that there has been a distinct LACK of really good stories on here lately. I'm glad to see you have posted something that definitely bucks that trend. The premise of this story has been used before, and it wasn't any more believable then either. Some of these stories have been very well done, but again, this one is different. As a fantasy, this is juicy, hot fun -- every guy's craziest fantasy. And it was done well. Really well. Plus, you made it easy to read with your excellent proofreading. I never read any of your stories before, but I have to read them now. Man, I wish I could write like you! 10/10 |
| 2010-05-13 01:51:35 | Living The Dream. | I'm trying to figure out if there are multiple trolls who have decided among themselves which of them should pose as DC, JT, ejls, and me, among several others, or if there is one actually fairly gifted (i.e. prolific) troll with multiple personality disorder, among his other sicknesses. Wait! Maybe he's not insane! Maybe he's just the guy whose picture appears in an illustrated dictionary along with the definition of "asshole!" Anyway, prepare to have some comments attributed to you. And by the way, EXCELLENT story. |
| 2010-07-13 21:26:39 | The Red Fang, Ch 1 Pt 1 | wantsomefun 2010-07-13 17:52:44 Both stupid and silly. Not such a good story, if that's what it's supposed to be. Try to take some remedial english classes at the local junior high school, then see if you still want to pretend that you're a writer, littlt Princess. READER 2010-07-13 18:54:27 You know what, wantsomefun, NO ONE forced your stupid ass to read this. And if you have nothing better to do than to harass PUBLISHED AUTHORS (yeah, dumbass, she's a published author) then you can go fuck yourself. Nicola Matthews 2010-07-13 19:04:18 There's nothing wrong with her grammar. What, all you small minded asses having a hard time keeping up with someone who writes above a 5th grade level? Why is it that I think all of these comments were written by the same asshole? I sure as hell didn't write the first one. The second one? Maybe a different person wrote it. If so, he's right. The post from "Nicola?" C'mon, she'd log in to post, just like I do. Sorry, honey! |
| 2010-07-13 21:26:47 | The Red Fang, Ch 1 Pt 1 | wantsomefun 2010-07-13 17:52:44 Both stupid and silly. Not such a good story, if that's what it's supposed to be. Try to take some remedial english classes at the local junior high school, then see if you still want to pretend that you're a writer, littlt Princess. READER 2010-07-13 18:54:27 You know what, wantsomefun, NO ONE forced your stupid ass to read this. And if you have nothing better to do than to harass PUBLISHED AUTHORS (yeah, dumbass, she's a published author) then you can go fuck yourself. Nicola Matthews 2010-07-13 19:04:18 There's nothing wrong with her grammar. What, all you small minded asses having a hard time keeping up with someone who writes above a 5th grade level? Why is it that I think all of these comments were written by the same asshole? I sure as hell didn't write the first one. The second one? Maybe a different person wrote it. If so, he's right. The post from "Nicola?" C'mon, she'd log in to post, just like I do. Sorry, honey! |