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Comments from Slipknot21
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2014-12-26 14:09:49 | Bar man and the Chef_(1) | just realised i have this down as true story.this is a work of fiction, none of it was real. but to put an answer to your question, at one point in my life i was forced to take leave from work as i had begun to suffer panic attacks very frequently. my employers decided it was best for me to sort myself out, then return to work. they stopped giving me hours until a doctor would give me the go ahead to work again. I thank you for reading the story, and i also thank you for pointing out that i do need to improve without throwing it in my face lol. |
| 2014-12-28 12:00:32 | Bar man and the Chef_(1) | "I" believe instead of "I cannot anyone attending school and NOT learning that one ALWAYS capitalizes "I" when it is used as a personal pronoun" that the following would have worked better. " I cannot believe that anyone who has attended school at any point would forget that the letter "I" should be capitalized when used as a personal pronoun". "I" am sorry my dyslexia offended you. What was your excuse for bad grammar? |
| 2015-01-22 10:33:51 | Bar man and the Chef Part 3 | unfortunatley my mind had run blank by this point (not saying the others were master pieces). i feel i made an error by dragging this story on, and alot of the time it was rush in and try get it done. i currently have ideas for my next story, but will not be rushing in with this one. i thank everyone that has given me feedback, and that has read the stories. i plan on taking more time on the next story. |