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Comments from talentlesscritic
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-01-17 06:14:00 | Natasha's growing desires | good story just dont rush it. girls dont go from vanilla to gangbang anal bukkake overnight |
| 2015-01-17 06:18:15 | The Perfect Gift For A Teenager | bad. bad bad bad. bad story idea, bad writing, bad characters, bad exposition, bad storytelling |
| 2015-01-17 06:45:34 | I found my sister stripping. | this is real writing. keep it up |