| 2015-02-27 00:10:56 |
Rebecca - My first sexual encounter with my cousin_(0)
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Should capitalize and drop all of the 'as' statements. |
| 2015-03-31 13:12:24 |
Sex du Juor: Fuck Me In This Forest
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One word "crap" |
| 2015-04-07 05:21:38 |
me and daddy
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It needs punctuation marks and to be proof read. Keep writing and forget about the other idiots that have no clue as to the words "constructive criticism". Some people on this site think they are the best writers in the world, when all the do is jerk off and put people down. |
| 2015-04-12 03:12:33 |
little jessica
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Who the fuck, what the fuck, writes such a piece of shit? |
| 2015-05-03 19:48:16 |
How My Niece Hannah Became My Fuck Buddy_(3)
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How many times are you gonna post this crap? |