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Comments from REPINSninja
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-08-29 05:16:43 | Ahriman: The Evolution of a Serial Killer 20 | ugh someones being difficult. I know its not real smartass. just because something is fictional doesn't mean it cant have some truth to it or a deeper background. and i only said that no one caught on because the closest thing we get to an outside world is the cop who show up on his doorstep a year after she disappears. He was one of the last people to see her alive so drake will always be in the polices radar and if he gets in the radar of another girl the worse it gets. just cause he has two expensive cars doesn't mean he is rich. thats all we get into in his money situation. No matter how rich you are having 100 people living in a house will attract attention. it will attract even more attention with a large house. |
| 2015-08-20 11:55:34 | Postal Pleasures | The beginning was a lil too long. Most of it wasn't important. Seemed like you rambled a little. It wouldn't be a problem if you story was longer. The sex parts need more detail tho. |
| 2015-08-24 09:13:46 | Ahriman: The Evolution of a Serial Killer 19 | If he does die that should be how it ends. His son doing it and becoming the head of the "family". And for some reason Ahriman sacrificing Kaneez seems like something that should happen. Just my thoughts. Love your work, always keeps me wanting more. Just realized it says written by women. =P |
| 2015-08-20 12:24:32 | Six for Sex Chapter 1_(1) | Beautifully written. You left us wanting more. Keep it up |
| 2015-08-18 02:00:22 | Ahriman: The Evolution of a Serial Killer 16 | Very good bro. Im glad to see Kaneez outside of the house and helping with the kidnapping. She could of ran away but didnt. It shows how truely stokholm syndrome works. its great to hear him say he loves her even tho it is a truely twisted love. Ever thought about putting her in a position to see her family or friends? Just to see the wa Dr she has with herself in her mind. Fighting herself to say something. But also ahriman loving her enough to give her the chance to leave if she wants. With no consequences for kaneez if she leaves. Just a thought. But I love your work anyway. Ive read your story a few times. |