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Comments from doombug
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2016-08-29 03:33:44 | The Dog Pound - Part 1: The Siberian Husky | Why do you put up the "young" tag for an 18 year old? You get negative rating for that. |
| 2016-09-27 08:14:41 | Kidnapping New Whores | Exclamation point over-used. It should only be used to highlight important events or indicate conversations, too much and it's immersion-breaking. |
| 2016-10-09 07:34:46 | Breaking Descent: A Temptress born | Why not have the dog lick and mount her afterward now that she's in the perfect position? |