| 2016-01-03 16:40:10 |
Best Friends Part 5 Conclusion
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Very nicely done. You took time to carefully build up every part of the story. Definitely rates a 10 out of 10. |
| 2017-03-27 04:07:34 |
Not a Word Spoken
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I started to read it. It looks like a great store, but the gaint wall of text just makes it hard to or enjoyable to read. Needs the have paragraph breaks in it. |
| 2018-07-21 01:48:54 |
Brad & Cassie
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Look forward to the chapter. Really interested if they take it to the next level. |
| 2018-07-21 01:49:02 |
Brad & Cassie
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Look forward to the chapter. Really interested if they take it to the next level. |
| 2019-09-28 05:45:45 |
A Sibling Love Story
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Unfortunately I lost interest in the story when every paragraph started with "he said she said". I don't think it was necessary to put that in each time. |