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Comments from byronnnn
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-05-30 02:41:13 | The Reunion_(0) | Nice writing with good thoughts and imagination. Love that your grammar is excellent and that makes it a quality "read" even for those not intrigued by your genre'. |
| 2015-05-30 02:47:01 | story of my porn | Just from a story-telling standpoint, there are quite a few conflicting inconsistencies and a few ideas that raise the question of plausibility But it moves well and some parts are high on erotic content. If you can bring up the "cosmetics" (eye-appeal, double space paragraphs, etc.) I think readers will stick with the story longer. The link was quite off-putting and I almost stopped reading on-the-spot as did your other commenting reader. Going with a "positive" rating for effort and time spent and because I am a fellow writer who understands the value of encouragement for writers to keep producing. |
| 2017-11-17 07:48:54 | Bills heads | Too bad they won't let me rate this more than one time. Hilarious! Your style is crazy-funny. |
| 2017-11-17 08:01:15 | To Be A Tart once More | Loved every word and would love to read more. +++ |
| 2017-11-17 08:25:13 | SATISFACTION GUARANTEED OR SUCK MY ASS | It's the "terribly redundant writing style that makes your writing fabulous. |