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Comments from DDMarshall5285
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2015-12-03 03:08:00 | Mom Caught Me_(2) | I remember this story entertaining me before the age restriction. The writing certainly sounds like a rouse a younger teen would try to pull. Nice to see that you updated it to give other a chance to enjoy it. |
| 2016-02-16 02:49:21 | Genius Floridus (Part 3 of 3)_(2) | I want to thank 'Rudleyirretatedone' for his eloquent critique of my use of ‘Gawd’ as slang vs. God. I truly found it helpful in improving my writing skills. I do have a few comments concerning his writing. First of all God is not an individual, but a deity. I am not referred to ‘as wipe.’ I’m ‘ass wipe’ to my friends. By the way what’s ‘u effing idiot?’ Oh, I get it - ‘you fucking idiot.’ Sorry I was a little slow on uptake there. Oh Gawd! Oh Gawd! Don’t let me post this and get into a pissing contest. Can’t ... stop… myself… DDMarshall |
| 2016-03-01 06:56:05 | It’s Good to be a Little Bad Part 1 of 3 | Part 3 is in the cue for approval. It should be posted soon. |
| 2016-03-02 17:14:28 | The Boss' Daughter | I agree with Anon 17:58:26. This is an enticing start to what could be an interesting series. Very well written. I can't wait to find out if Mr. Schwartz is fired or inherited the company when daddy catches them. |
| 2016-03-04 15:03:48 | Lost Empire 16 | Phew, that was a close call. Don't you dare kill Shelby! |