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Date Story title Comment
2015-07-27 14:14:04 Freedom Chap-1 Reading through this i found some mistakes like i wrote ashley in one place when it should have been emily also my grammer was wrong so would like to apologize in advance
2015-07-28 05:14:52 Freedom Chap-1 @anonymous reader 1 Certainly would keep that suggestion in mind while writing the next part
@anonymous reader 2
1. I thought this was a dark fantasy because as i wrote these children are part of an experiment which would definitely scar all of them no matter the end result.
2. The experiment wanted to know more about freedom and the most common known freedom fight was that of the black against white and so they conducted experiment on that its all according to plot line that i would reveal.
Anyways thank you for reading both of you :D
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