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Comments from badboy1958
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2017-10-28 02:47:28 | Meeting James Chapter 1 | Mel Writing is great, and there is an actual story here and not just sex this and sex that, which I like. But it seems a little "over the top" to me and pushes the envelope of the suspension of disbelief thing. College sophomore (in high school two years earlier) spends her last dime to dress up for ritzy charity ball due to importuning of dear friend, yet immediately abandons her to spend time with much older stranger, who had to rescue her from blathering idiot trying to hit on her because she's not self assured enough to tell idiot to fuck off herself ,but apparently is poised and worldly enough to enchant and hop into bed with suave stranger hours later, spend the night and agree to become a "kept woman" at lunch next day even though he's a married man with children just because it "feels right"?.Maybe my summary of the plot line is a tad unfair. But I assume you see my point. I shall read on because the writing is so good and description of the sex is very erotic, |
| 2017-10-28 04:04:06 | Meeting James Chapter 2 | Mel, Well done. Very provocative writing. Re the reader's grammatical comment, the "James and I menus" was correct imo. "James and I" = "us" Pronoun may actually work better there: "handed us menus." Looking forward to the Lesbian sex between Mel and Gianna when James goes back to LA. Gonna happen, isn't it? |
| 2017-10-28 05:04:40 | Slut Wife Chronicles... Debbi | Mel, "Hot" is too much of an understatement to describe this story. It's more like schorching! |
| 2017-10-29 04:29:55 | An Office Affair_(0) | Mel, The wind up was a bit too long. But the pitch was awesome! Most of these "office affair" stories involve older guys and younger girls. So your switch-up was refreshing and the interracial aspect added a touch of special spice. Write on! |