| 2016-02-18 20:28:48 | Sovereignty  10 | very good as all the chapters are but like them, this one is also too short - wish you would write longer chapters for all these stories ! | 
			
			| 2016-04-21 17:09:13 | Lost Empire 20_(0) | Forgive me for saying but I believe that you are spreading yourself too thin - trying to write too many stories at one time making the chapters too short and post are too far in between - please pick one and finish it - then move to the next - that way we get longer posts with less time between them. | 
			
			| 2016-04-20 16:42:51 | SOVEREIGNTY 12 | Forgive me for saying but I believe that you are spreading yourself too thin - trying to write too many stories at one time making the chapters too short and post are too far in between - please pick one and finish it - then move to the next - that way we get longer posts with less time between them. | 
			
			| 2016-08-10 13:09:54 | A guy and his...? 36  Sadness | What is the deal with you and these short chapters ? Just when you start to warm up to the story and get into it - it's over and another wait begins. | 
			
			| 2017-03-29 16:23:50 | The Succubae Seduction 2: The Twins, Chapter 15 | I also like this story and it would be nice if you continued it. It has been a long time since you have updated the story now and I am wondering if you plan to finish it |