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Comments from Batman79
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2017-01-10 22:56:39 | mom gets banged hard in bank locker | Here's some real advice for you. Paragraphs make the story easier to read. Without them, people are gonna take one look at how the story is written and turn right around and go back regardless of whether the story is good or not. Also dialogue, more of it. Write the the conversations clearly with speech marks to make things clearer. Hope you take this advice and I hope it helps. |
| 2016-11-16 02:26:43 | A New Day, The Other Me chapter 11 | This is an amazing series. After reading all the other series before this, its like i actually know guy as a friend. It literally causes me pain to see guy like this. I really hope he gets a happy ending. Maybe he changes into the guy he's supposed to be. How many chapters do you think you're gonna do for this series? Do you have another story ready for us after? |
| 2017-01-02 20:11:57 | Son's Revenge | I wanna clarify a few things that maybe weren't made clear in the story. Many commenters say that Rick should have said something about being bullied. It's a good point that could drag the realism down. Rick had his new found confidence and skills but when placed in front of Jack again for the first time in years. The fear he had as a kid creeps back. Jack ruled his life and made a point to torment it. Anyone else Rick would have just beat the shit out of him and been done with it. But Jack is the reason Rick lived in terror for so long, so it's more difficult. Also to just beat Jack from the start would be too easy. As is explained in the story. To bust the four of them would deny Rick the pure sweetness that is vengeance. He needed to take his time with it and hurt them slowly and bask in their pain. Hopefully that clears some things up for you guys and I'm happy to answer anymore questions you have. But I rarely check my inbox so just post them in the comments. |
| 2016-06-20 20:43:12 | A New Day, The Other Me chapter 6 | Hey POI I love these stories and I've really grown attached to all the characters. I just wanted to make a couple of suggestions. In one of the future chapters of this story, I want guy to meet his dad. To see what he's become. Also after this story is finished, how about another alternate series where Guy never broke up with heather. Please hurry with chapter 7 the anticipation is gonna kill me! |
| 2016-12-14 18:45:40 | A New Day, The Other Me chapter 12 | Shit that was great! Guy is losing his mind. I gotta ask. Is this gonna be your last story with guy. If so will you be posting more stories on here cause I've enjoyed every story you've posted on here and I'd be gutted if you stopped. |