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| 2021-09-17 08:45:13 | Jamaican family vacation | Hi Elisa thanks for your comment, I'm always trying to improve when it comes to my writing. It is better than my previous stories so there is some improvement but I'd like to be stronger when it comes to writing style and structure. I wouldn't mind some tips and constructive observations if you wanted to message me privately? ??any help gratefully received. |