| 2016-12-20 14:08:33 |
Perchance to Dream Pt. 2
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Great story, I too cant wait for the next chapter since I have read the James stories by melanieatplay and knew the background for part of the story I probably liked that reference to it the best. Since it was just the two of characters in the story I thought you over used Mel and Melanie instead of her and she but that's just me maybe I am wrong. |
| 2016-08-04 01:14:59 |
Me First
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very cute well done I really loved it just can't wait for the mothers story |
| 2016-12-28 20:24:23 |
Feels Like the First Time... Sapphic Edition_(1)
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great job @melanieatplay love the story and the writing is just what I would expect from you perfect I did see one spot where it says when when it should be went I think can't wait for a new story from you |
| 2016-10-21 22:35:39 |
The Road Trip
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You are be coming to be the best writer on here, thats something I known for a while great job!!!!! |
| 2016-10-08 16:54:50 |
Winter Fixer Upper part 1
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I love a love story this great |