| 2016-10-11 18:03:21 |
Over the Waterfall
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well from one old man to another that was one great read loved every bit of it. |
| 2017-01-20 17:59:16 |
A Femme Domme Tale
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Another very well written story, not something I would normally read, but maybe if it happen to me I would enjoy it. |
| 2017-05-13 18:33:53 |
A Femme Domme Tale Chapter 2
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This is so well written it is so real to me. Making me want the next chapter now, you left it so open you can go many ways, I can't wait to find out where it is going. As you have told many times its not my cup of tea, it is though so well done I couldn't stop reading and wanted it to keep going. |
| 2017-07-25 21:08:51 |
White T-shirt Game
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Need to dress it up a little more makings of a great story more description of you and the others in the story would make it come alive more but all and all very interesting |
| 2017-08-05 16:20:47 |
A Femme Domme Tale Chapter 2
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I see you have published chapter 3 on Lush have you also submitted her also |