| 2016-11-17 00:45:12 |
The Act of Vengeance: Chapter 2
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i would like a follow up story from amy's POV. it is interesting. have amy eat lena's pussy while being butt fucked by alan. |
| 2016-11-21 06:24:42 |
A New Day, The Other Me chapter 11
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this has been a great series of stories.i loved them all.i just wished Guy could have got his harem in this series.i hope you continue to keep writing maybe not so dark. you are a great author after all.do you have any books in the mass media whether by a pen name or just the books titles?one ending i would like is for Guy to get justice from the cops.have Gwen talk her father into helping Guy get his revenge because he needs it to be whole.she should tell him that is where Guy gets his anger from. let Neil give up on trying to get Guy to do the right thing and just help him get his revenge.then maybe they can be a true family.with Guy getting his revenge and Neil and Gwen helping him they can be a closer family and Guy can be rid of all that anger and hate and live while the responsible parties are either beaten within an inch of their lives or turned into the cops.as for Jim he needs to be shut down along with all his people and suppliers and the truth come out about Carlos's gang. |
| 2016-11-22 04:42:49 |
watching my husband fuck his sister_(1)
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can you do a part 2 with anal? it wasn't to bad but it was just getting good. try an orgy party or group sex or a glory hole. |
| 2016-12-22 03:21:39 |
Brad the bully seduces my mom - Part 7
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the only way to make this better is if you let him get his justice and impregnate his mother and girlfriend and use them as sluts and whores. brad needs to be analy fucked hard by guys and let him swallow from multiple blow jobs. if something does not start turning around in the next chapter i will stop reading your story. no man should go through this type of shit no matter if he is a sissy lor not. this is getting to repetitive. i thought you were a better author. this is some sick shit. i know you can do better. please don't prove me wrong. is this what gets you off? are you brad? did something like this happen to you or a girlfriend? |
| 2016-11-22 05:35:39 |
The Jean Genie - Part 2
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still waiting on part 3. did you give up? did something in life happen? i really want the next chapter. have a threesome with mother and daughter. let them eat the creampie out of each other. do more anal and sex scenes but be more descriptive. the sex is to short and ordinary. have the hero get some porn stars to have sex with and get them pregnant. make a wish that certain girls won't get pregnant. if the girls are bitches get them pregnant. let the attraction be turned on or off. |