| 2016-09-18 13:44:23 |
Sister dropping her bra 1
|
Have to add anal and sister and facial let sister eat cream pie out of sisters pussy. Add a glory hole. I agree with you need to find an editor to make sure your English is readable. Can't wait for next chapter. Make a threesome with sisters |
| 2016-09-22 18:50:46 |
A New Day, The Other Me chapter 9_(1)
|
Guy needs to introduce Syd to anal. they need to be girlfriend and boyfriend. try to get Syd into a threesome with another girl. I would prefer Marta so Syd can learn to eat pussy and eat a creampie out of her pussy and ass. Let Syd get all kinky and crazy horny and bring up some wild type of sexual acts. Can you bring back Guy's first girl I think her name was Bridgette. I don't see why the detective didn't think of dirty cops that are spanish. Those cops could be trying to muscle in on The Union or take it over maybe it is the Faces of Fear. I can't wait to hear what Gwen has to tell Guy so she can date Mark. Has Mark and Gwen had sex yet? It is not like Mark to wait or not hit on a girl. Guy needs to threaten Mark about taking Gwens virginity. Guy needs to ask Gwen if she is still a virgin during their talk. Let Gwen put Mark in his place let her be able to kick his ass in the gym physically and not need a man to defend her. |
| 2016-10-18 11:45:35 |
Brad the bully seduces my mom - Part 3_(2)
|
he needs to get proof of what is going on at school and a video of them fucking his mom at home like a whore. so that she knows he knows what is going on. he should tell her he lied that they have been bullying him all throughout school and he needs to ask her if she is in love with brad or is she just a slut because a whore would be getting paid. he should ask in front of his mother to brad "are you going to marry my mother?" he needs to ask why she is fucking brad. the son should grow a pair of balls and try to go for some incest after brad has fucked his mother. he should tell her if my bully is good enough to fuck you why aren't i? he needs to tell her everything brad has done to him and why he hasn't told anyone before. |
| 2016-10-17 20:24:11 |
A New Day, The Other Me chapter 10
|
i hate that nat is a cock tease just enough to get her some. maybe she is bisexual. let guy just tease nat and not get any sex. guy should tell beth what happened so she can take care of nat. guy has his bootie call but still no girlfriend. so when does he find the one? guy needs to get to know more about bridgette like is she serious or is she just another one night stand. where is her mind at with guy? how does she feel about him? we need a girl who can get guy to finish his problems so he can stop being angry at everyone. guy should get mark to hook him up with some girls. guy should give marta or imelda a call for a date. i can't wait for the next chapter. is there a certain amount of time between postings of chapters? |
| 2016-10-15 05:50:24 |
Naruto AU Pt 1- Kushina and Mito Uzumaki.
|
naruto needs to get some ass. where is part 2? |