| 2017-02-25 10:24:46 |
Gym Lovers Part I
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Nice. I felt like a fly on the wall. I vote you continue if you're seeking comments of that kind. I'm not a women so I have no idea how intuitive it would be for two who had never been with another woman to flow into a clit to clit position so easily, so I wondered about that as I read. But that's my own naivety and curiosity about things of that nature. Want more? Heck yeah! Will I be looking for the rest of the story? You betcha. Thanks. |
| 2017-12-05 12:32:35 |
The Blind Girl in the Rain: part 3
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I agree with everything said here. I think it's a lovely ending to a lovely story, but I do hope you are at least thinking about one more part to solidify their familiarity through the growth of their relationship and deal with the "other women's reactions a while doing the lovely things you do so well with words. |
| 2018-09-06 10:19:20 |
rainy night part 2
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Please continue the story. Any issues with a story - grammatically or punctuation-wise, I do a rewrite for my own use. I can because I have the time to waste. Keep it up. For a first story it's really good, but don't leave us hanging for sure. :) |
| 2018-09-06 10:19:24 |
rainy night part 2
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Please continue the story. Any issues with a story - grammatically or punctuation-wise, I do a rewrite for my own use. I can because I have the time to waste. Keep it up. For a first story it's really good, but don't leave us hanging for sure. :) |