| 2017-03-08 20:06:59 |
Kassidy 2_(0)
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This one also needs another part |
| 2017-03-08 08:41:01 |
Julie 2 - (edited)
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This definitely needs a part three |
| 2017-03-08 03:32:55 |
Alyssa 3 - Mom's trap
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There needs to be another part if there is one because it's such a good story |
| 2017-03-08 02:18:57 |
Alyssa 2... and Morgan
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This one is DEFINITELY better than the first part, a lot more suspense and detail. I actually had to stop for a while to rest my eyes just because it was so long. But I enjoy your stuff |
| 2017-03-07 23:26:48 |
Me, joe and his gf
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It's a good story but to be honest it needs more spacing between paragraphs so you don't get cross eyed because it looks like a big block of letters on top of each other. But keep up the good work |