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Comments from happyhornydog
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2020-02-01 18:34:33 | Snowed In With Dad | Yes pleaseeee more of this story. |
| 2020-03-04 00:29:48 | Barry | Great read I loved Barry sharing you with his mate John. Reassures us that in sex as in life we all need our bit of the action. I am going to read more of your stories soon. Keep up the writing please. |
| 2020-03-08 00:56:38 | A Dream_(1) | Hi thanks for the story. It was a bit “vanilla” ie unsexciting so I couldn’t give you a positive rating. Your writing style is repetitive telling the story from both perspectives it becomes confusing to read. Otherwise your narrative, prose and grammar seem good to me, you could try a first or third person style for the next story. Add some more spice, I was hoping for the massage to be by a third party ie stranger and lead to extramarital sex or similar spicy twist. Congrats on your first try, ask your girlfriend what her wildest fantasy would be and use that as a story theme. Never know might excite more than just your readers. Cheers John |
| 2020-03-08 16:53:27 | Beastiality Porn Star | Really enjoyed this story. Combines all the perverse sexual pleasures we seek in life. Hope the cameramen and others get to join in to an all in fuckfest. What could be better cunts cocks dogs and horses all in the action |
| 2020-03-08 17:03:52 | Beastiality Porn Star | Really enjoyed this story. Combines all the perverse sexual pleasures we seek in life. Hope the cameramen and others get to join in to an all in fuckfest. What could be better cunts cocks dogs and horses all in the action |