| 2017-06-23 09:58:22 |
The lift home.
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It's a great story, just need to work on spelling and punctuation. I really enjoyed it and look forward to part 2. |
| 2017-06-29 14:10:30 |
A Sadistic Couple Chapter 1 & 2
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It's just really confusing. If you have to write in the first person, it's best to stick with one vantage point, or make each one's longer and separated out more into paragraphs. I know there can be formatting errors when you transfer a story, so maybe edit it while it's here to add a few breaks? |
| 2017-06-29 08:32:49 |
Her fantasy pt1
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Thanks to those who voted. Any feedback would be gratefully received. |
| 2017-07-15 11:46:09 |
The Bounty Fantasy_(0)
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Love to read more about what happens to Cassandra next, or Andrea making her husband watch as she gets a revenge fuck. |
| 2017-07-15 13:48:01 |
Freshman Couple's Night Out
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Always enjoy your stories. Great work. |