| 2017-07-22 14:35:32 |
Dallas Kidnapping
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Enjoyed chapter 1. A few words need changing but nothing that would make me mark it down. Really looking forward to chapter 2, don't let the negatives bother you x |
| 2017-07-22 14:49:43 |
Taking What He Wants._(2)
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*muscles. Mussels live in the sea. |
| 2017-07-26 04:28:34 |
BBW threesome
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Loved it. Seems like it's true bigger girls can take it harder. Can't wait to read more. |
| 2018-02-03 10:56:10 |
Naughty Nick
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I really enjoyed your story. You might try separating sections to allow it to flow better? Ignore the negative marks. If they aren't going to feedback what they didn't like then they aren't worth a though. |
| 2018-02-03 11:10:07 |
Naughty Nick PT2
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A good continuation to the story. I hope you keep going with it, I'm interested to see where your mind is going from here. |