| 2012-04-04 00:58:23 |
A Game of Inches - Part One.
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Excellent story, this is one of the better ones on the sight I have read so far. Keep up the good work and will be checking out part 2 soon. |
| 2012-04-14 00:01:21 |
Virgin Farm part 1
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Not bad for a beginning and a open tease for the future. Keep up the work. Suggestion - try to develop a bit more on the parts of the five senses, especially when he sees her topless for the first time. You have an excellent foundation that can be developed well. |
| 2012-04-14 00:04:33 |
A BUSINESS PROPOSITION
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I have to say this story soars like few others I have read; my hats off to you in writing of it. Well done indeed! |
| 2012-04-27 17:55:35 |
Wendigo
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Normally I do not care for horror genre much; yet this one is well crafted and done, excellent story in all. My hats off to you. |
| 2012-06-17 19:52:52 |
The Party - Part 1
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Not bad, it can use some refining though; I see potential within it. |