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Comments from snowleopard3200
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2012-09-09 15:23:53 | THE MOON STONE, Part 2 | Great story there; I am looking forward to the adventures continuing as it just gets more and more intriguing with each reading. |
| 2012-10-02 19:45:07 | The Yellow Sign. | excellent story - blends so much into one effort; wonderfully done. |
| 2012-11-04 09:50:11 | Helena's Nightmare | Great story - loved it from one end to the other. |
| 2012-11-05 14:26:06 | THE MOON STONE, part 3 (THREE) | You asked for commentary: Overall the story is good and continues with the previous two parts. Personally some of the slang felt out of place with the story context as a whole and some descriptions could be more flushed out. Other than this its a wonderful tale being told for all of us to read. I wish a direct link to the other two parts could have been put in, but I do understand the limits of the site. A wonderful job Hardrive. |
| 2012-12-27 07:43:10 | Winters Dawning: Charity's Holiday to Remember | To the one seeking underaged girls, may the police find you and swing you from the end of a rope tied around your most private of parts as they drag you down the street to the police station. Creatures such as you should be destroyed. |