| 2018-03-27 01:54:04 |
The Rest Stop_(0)
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Mmm...very well done, Becky! Please do move your story forward from Alyssa's lovely initiation to becoming a gloryhole slut! Having been a gay gloryhole slut myself for over forty years, I can so identify with the exquisite joys and pleasures to be found in servicing anonymous strangers! (And, I truly hope that YOU have experienced these delights as well, Becky!) Keep up the good work and please, give us more! Regards, Glori |
| 2018-03-27 02:18:23 |
The Rest Stop: Part 2
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Excellent, once more, Becky! Very hot stuff, and I just ADORE that big, black cock being worshipped by our heroines! I'm looking forward to Part 3! Regards, Glori |
| 2018-03-27 02:39:39 |
The Rest Stop: Part 3
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Very good, hot sex writing, Becky! I look forward to reading more of your work! Thanks! Glori |
| 2018-03-28 03:44:27 |
Becoming Sadi
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An excellent story, Becky! You have an fine sense of the erotic narrative! BUT...as others have mentioned, your grammar and punctuation need improvement. Just carefully proofread your work before you publish it. Please do, as you're capable of top notch pornographic writing! Best regards, Glori |
| 2018-03-29 23:33:36 |
Finally Fucking the Dog
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A wonderful story, and sounding very authentic! Keep up the good work! |