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Comments from Dudley Dowrong
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2019-06-30 19:54:44 | Recycling | Creative & imaginative A little wicked like "Hormones" It's not nice to fool Mother Nature. Ur levity dealing with serious matters is unique. Thank you for the fun. (on paper) I believe Ur disclaimer at the top shows Ur true concern for responsible sex not games & tricks or deception; funny as it seems. " |
| 2019-06-30 20:11:49 | Mouth Part 1 | Not really that funny yet in this one. Kids can be so mean to one another. |
| 2019-07-01 12:32:30 | My foster mom | What about her getting pregnant? !st she tells Hank & Bill, "Don't cum in me!" then she tells Bill, "I want to to U cum in me" What changed? If there were any technical errors, I didn't catch them. Believable scenario, especially for a true story. Not the 1st example of truth, some older women like younger guys that hard up quicker & longer so they can climax. Even after they shoot their wad, come back is sooner. |
| 2019-07-01 13:31:34 | Mrs Prim's daughters | Seems he should discuss periods, VD, & body parts like clit, cervix, womb, ganas, foreskin, penis, masturbation, ovulation, safe sex, etc. Emphasis on Bible reference to rape, adultery, etc. Read the "Song of Solomon" Teach them to tell their lover what they like in foreplay as well as copulation. Ur setting is unusual but believable, Sara trust Bill & Carolyn, the most important quality of a relationship, sexual or otherwise. Yeah on the peanut butter, right out of the jar, or mixed with jelly, syrup, honey, or other flavors (I like Apple Sauce). Noticed a few errors,like "Who is Cheryl?" in "Mrs Prim Pt 2" Saa I assume is short for Sara. One other word was misspelled or out of place, I can't remember. I understand how difficult proofing can be when U have written it. Looking forward to future episodes. Good work. |
| 2019-07-01 15:13:09 | Good Neighbor | Excellent ending. The only deletion was, "Were they going to sell any of Jen's pics?" She could use that money to hang close to her photographer For more pics, sex, & income. Instead of moving to Mom's, why not just have Aunt Julie move in to help keep the house. The aunt is a good idea if she & Jen would do Mom/Daughter pics for more sales/money to support the trio + retirement income. Could also be a lot more fun; videos are becoming a hot selling item. Set the camera & do a threesome. This is a more realistic seduction rather than just jumping in bed the 1st or 2nd contact. Jen's movement toward nudity & fucking was much more realistic. Her truthfulness about her frustration with her lack of sexual satisfaction & anger toward her husband completes the realism. Remember seeing a few errors but forgot what exactly. Better proof Ur entries. |